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Hold it! Before posting your next blog, read this… (The Four Headline Tests)

by Rasheed Bustamam on March 16, 2012

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headline testThe "headline tests" that can increase clicks to your posts...

Imagine: You spend a good hour or two drafting a blog post. It's an incredible blog post--a post that solves a problem that has been plaguing many people for ages (aka one year--that's an "age" in internet terms!)

You write it, you SEO the hell out of it, and you press "Publish," thinking to yourself, Damn, I'm gonna be famous now!

The next day, you check your stats to see how many thousands of comments you've gotten, only to see that your traffic has actually gone down.

What the hell?! You think to yourself. That does it, I'm never gonna write a good post ever again!

Sound familiar?

"Do you have a solution for me, Sheed?"

This is the first post in a series of posts that is intended to dissect the "flow" of people who go to your website.

The first step is traffic. Put simply, traffic is how many people go to your website. Now, if you think about it logically, there's really only one way people can go to your website--by clicking a link. Sure, you can type your website name into your URL, but you can't rely on that for traffic stats.

Now, the psychology of people clicking links is simple. Try this yourself--next time you take any action as a result of a call to action, immediately ask yourself: "why did I do that?"

Out of all the links there are to click, why did you click that link?

When someone shares a link on Facebook, here are two things that appear--the blurb the person writes about the link, and the URL of the link (if previews are enabled then you see the title of the link as well as some meta description). Here's what I'm talking about:

Headline Test

Top to bottom: blurb, article title, article URL, meta data

So, ask yourself this: Would you click on that blog post? Why or why not?

This is where the rubber meets the road. Not many people pay much attention to the URL of the link (after all, it looks like gobbledygook), so the only things that stand out are the blurb, the headline, and the meta data.

You can easily change your blurb out whenever you post to a different group, but you can't change your blurb when your page appears on the search engines.

Likewise, you  can change your meta data on Facebook, but you only have one meta placeholder for the search engines.

The thing that most stands out about a blog post is the headline. So, you want your headlines to follow what are known as the headline tests when titling your blog posts.

If you imagine each of your blog posts as an article in a newspaper, which headlines are you more attracted to? Which headlines are you more inclined to read?

Statistically speaking, it's the ones with the biggest font and that stand out the most, but in a paper where all headlines are treated equally, it's most likely the headlines that catch your eye because of a special word.

So, what's the headline test?

The headline test is a little checklist for your headline. Your headline should ideally pass 4 of the 4 qualities, but since we don't live in a perfect world, 3 out of 4 will suffice.

The first headline test: headline length

This is actually the only test that is imperative to pass. Why? Headline real estate is limited.

Having a headline that is 50 words long will guarantee that it won't get clicked.

Keep it short, concise, and to the point.

four headline tests

Fails "headline length" test, passes the "WTF" test

The second headline test: "so what?"

I tend to view headlines as titles of books as well (I find it to be a more accurate description of headlines, more than newspaper headlines).

So you have your title, then optionally a sub-title.

Obviously, your blog can't have a sub-title (or can it?), but one powerful thing for a blog headline to have is...

(Parentheses) or: colons

Why? I dunno. But compare:

How to Make Money Online

with

Cracking the Code of Making Money Online (And How You Can Do it)

or even

How to Make Money Online: A Complete Guide

Doesn't the second one stand out more? It makes the reader say, "There's a code for making money online? Moreover, I can crack it too? click"

Or even the third one. Though I'd be more partial towards the second one, the third one is powerful in its own right because it's telling you that it's your one-stop shop to make money online.

When you read your headline, ask yourself: "So what?" Why would someone click the link, when there are 100 other posts that have the same exact title?

Remember: readers are selfish. "What's in it for me" is what they are always asking themselves. "How can this help me?" is what makes people click.

Headline Test

Fails: "So what" test. Passes: "Are democrats turned on by it?" test

On that note...

 

The third headline test: "Have I read this before?"

We're all bloggers. We all write blogs and we all read blogs.

Many times, we may get inspiration from one blog post, and then craft a blog post based off of it... sometimes even with a very similar title.

Nothing's wrong with getting inspiration from a blog... everything is wrong with you almost copying! (If you're going to get inspiration from a blog, read at least 3 posts on the same topic, take notes, and craft your post from your notes only, do not take main points from the blogs!!)

If you're getting inspiration from other blogs, then sometimes it is better to craft your headline after your blog post.

When you read your headline, what's your first impression? If it's, "Hey, I've read something like this before," then change your headline.

There are countless words in the English language--don't settle for boring ones! Put effort into your headlines, they are one of the main "clicking factors" for your blog!

Headline test

Sadly, this happens every day--people are desensitized to this sort of news now :(

The fourth headline test: Is it too hype-y?

Hype isn't bad. But it is always better to have low-hype and over-deliver on the promise of your headline, rather than have high-hype and under-deliver on your headline. If you set expectations low and exceed them, it looks better for your credibility. If you set them high via hype and fail to meet them (in your reader's eyes), then the reader will develop hype-blindness from your... well, hype!

So if you're going to be bold and have an article named "The Ultimate Pinterest Marketing Guide," it had better not be a 500 word blog post with only 5 tips on how to market on Pinterest.

But if you have an article called, "Four tips to accelerate your Pinterest marketing strategies" and add five tips instead (one bonus tip for not knowing math?), as well as make the four tips super quality tips (instead of just, "be social, pin a lot, don't be selfish" etc), then you can guarantee that the reader will be more likely to click on one of your headlines in the future because he or she remembers how you over delivered on your promise.

headline test

What if the "mentee" doesn't make $5.9 billion in his first year? There goes your integrity. Click to make it not look weird

Bonus headline test: Word shifting

Your choice of words is supremely powerful, especially when you have limited real estate for your headline.

If you craft your headline into something memorable, then you can bet that it will stand out. Consider the difference between:

How to Make Money Online

and

Money-Making Madness: Milking the Online Cash Cow

The latter is memorable because of the blatant alliteration. This is where your literary prowess comes to play. However, don't get too carried away in being creative that your headlines fail the other headline tests!

The takeaway

Take advantage of both sight and sound when choosing words--if you can use words that evoke high emotion as well as paint a picture of what your reader will achieve by reading your article, then you greatly increase the likelihood of your link being clicked.

On that note, you can use the four headline tests whenever you have links to be clicked within your blog, but they won't be on your blog at all if they don't click on your very first headline ;)

Action Steps: How to manifest magnetic headlines

  1. Brainstorm your blog first. I myself sometimes think of titles first, but more important than titles are ideas.
  2. Write your blog BEFORE writing the title.
  3. Follow the four (plus one) headline tests as listed above and ensure that your headline follows at least three.

Use these tests as a checklist (bookmark this page so you can quickly refer to it when writing a blog), and try it for 30 days. Let me know how it goes for you!

Moving onto you

What other tips can you give on creating headlines that increase click-through?

I'll see you on the next part of the blogging series!

Mickey

In peace, love, and prosperity,

Rasheed

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1 Rodney Daniely March 16, 2012 at 7:42 pm

Great post, Rasheed. The title is just as important as the content that comes behind it.

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2 Rasheed Bustamam March 16, 2012 at 8:23 pm

Definitely bro. Unfortunately, people DO judge blogs by their titles ;)

Rasheed

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3 Gina Ghafari March 18, 2012 at 1:43 pm

Thank you for your very informative post
I loved the way you break it down and made us, “your readers” feel the difference.
You deliver by taking your readers through the process and mastering the concept. Awesome value Rasheed

“When One Teaches, Two Learn”

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4 Rasheed Bustamam March 18, 2012 at 4:59 pm

Thanks Gina! I’m glad you found it valuable! =)

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5 Amthony McNeil March 18, 2012 at 4:32 pm

Rasheed Hi-Five dude! Excellent post! Your point about going low on the hype and over delievering is a vital point.

By over delivering, it increases the reader to not only want to read your next post, but look forward to reading it. Great job!

Anthony McNeil

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6 Rasheed Bustamam March 18, 2012 at 5:03 pm

Thanks Anthony!

It goes for everything else… In Bob Burg’s “The Go-Giver Sells More” he talks about always overselling. Though it is free to read blog content, it still costs time, so if you make it more than worth the reader’s time to read it… well, they’re more likely to read again! (The “upsell” process with time ;) )

Rasheed

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